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'Space' and other adventures

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"Space"

It's really quite epic
We've only just met;
And already, already
I mean, I mean
You've just only said
That I've UFOs afloat in my head.

And as we went on our way (for the day)
Your words filled me with trinkets;
Exciting things to say.


"Opacity"

Opacity is the key!
Take some detail
Down for me
All hail the land
Of opacity.


"Crust"

A crust
A crust
It is a must;
For those of us
With razors of rust
A crust
A crust
It is a must.
Three exciting tales written for your enjoyment.
© 2007 - 2024 kchangita
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The first one made me think of when you first start to really really like someone, and you are all excited about it. You made me think of that without it sounding cheesy, too, and that is pretty damn cool.
The second one is my favourite. Makes me think of reality vs. imagination, and how the imagination tends to be vague until you bring the ideas out into the world, work the details out and create something complete and real.
The third part made me laugh my ass off. It made me think of you making fun of me about the crust. XD hahahaha.

I can't really offer any critique, I like this a lot.